My Last Sunset: Christian Chiakulas
In My Last Sunset: An antisocial teen sets out to solve the mystery of why Jessica Carpenter killed herself in the halls of their high school.
My Last Sunset by Christian Chiakulas is a Mystery/Crime novel.
Title of book: The Last Sunset
Author Christian Chiakulas
Rating: 4.5 stars
Reviewed by: Jeffery J. Smith
The tale is both a who-dun-it and a what-d-they-do? Despite killing off the victim in the opening, the author keeps her alive via other means and successfully manages to create her personality and create a sorrowful sympathy for the teen. The story is set mainly in a high school and the characters and descriptions ring true no matter how far — or not — one may be removed from the years of teen angst.
The author interweaves several themes and does a good job with them all. Along with the usual sex, there is well-handled bullying and “rot at the top” — corrupt officials in charge — and society’s mis-emphasis on sports, allowing star athletes to not be held accountable for offenses minor or major. Further, the characters had to deal with dysfunctional families. Despite all that, it was not at all a downer, thanks to the outlook of the teen detective and his sidekick.
The voices of the adolescents were not bogged down by slang but were alive and rang true. The author has mastered the genre of “murder” (actually, suicide) mystery and kept this reader wondering what the next clue would reveal. And the two leads were good companions to keep active in one’s imagination.
EXCERPT: My Last Sunset
Michael might be having the same idea as me, because he says, “Hey, you hear about that freshman who killed herself?”
“She was a sophomore,” I say, staring ahead at the blackboard.
“Oh,” Michael says. He’s a senior, so it makes sense he wouldn’t know. “That’s right, I knew that.” Liar. “You heard she did it here?”
“Yeah, in the bathroom downstairs,” I say. This class is on the fourth floor. Jessica killed herself on the second. The music was so loud from the dance that nobody heard the gunshot, and she didn’t get found until a janitor came in the next day. She’d been absent from school Thursday and Friday last week, and I heard her mom had reported her missing to the police. Then, for whatever reason, she came back to school to end her life.
What the hell, Jessica.
It’s not that I can’t believe it. Jessica was a nice girl, I think, and seemed happy a lot of the time, but seeming happy and being happy aren’t the same thing; you don’t have to be smart to know or even articulate that. Like I said, I didn’t know her that well, but I knew her a little; enough to see that, like the rest of us, she had shit going on she didn’t talk about. What I didn’t see was that she was the kind of person who couldn’t deal with it, like we all do.
Or that it was the kind of shit that can’t be dealt with.
“Heard she left a note,” Michael says, and now I’m aware that he’s looking at me even though his face hasn’t moved. His eyes moved.
I didn’t hear anything about a note. Whatever was going on with her, she definitely wanted to be found, wanted somebody to know.
Or maybe everybody.
Half a dozen more people stream in over the next two or three minutes; this class is pretty small to begin with and there are four absent. The eight o’clock bell rings just as Goldman appears in the doorway. Behind him is Panzer, one of the school’s security guards (not his real name, but it should be).
I raise an eyebrow as Goldman enters the classroom and the talking dies down. Then he looks right at me and says, “Damon, could you please go with Mr. Cousins to the dean’s office?”
A low “Oooooh…” goes through the small class, and I stand up, wondering what the hell I did. Usually when I’m in trouble, I know exactly why. As I cross the room to where Panzer is standing, arms folded across his chest, I notice the two girls who’d been in the room early shooting me nasty looks, like I personally wronged them. I don’t even know their names.
Panzer steps aside to let me exit the room first then closes the door after us. I throw my messenger bag over my shoulder and look at him.
“What’s this about,” I say, a little worried.
The halls are deserted, and I stare at the floor as we walk to the main nexus where the stairwells are, passing over the blurry reflections of the fluorescent lights in the freshly-waxed floor. The dean’s office is on the second floor, right down the hall from the girl’s bathroom. I stare at the door as we pass it.
The dean’s office is small, considering there are three deans that share it along with a secretary and the school’s sole counselor. The hub is a yellow-painted room with the secretary’s desk, several file cabinets, a large wooden conference table, doors to the private offices of the deans and counselor, and plastic bins hanging on the walls filled with handouts and leaflets about substance abuse, sexual abuse, good ol’ fashioned domestic abuse, birth control, STDs, juvie, and there at the end—
The three deans are all sitting at the conference table along with the counselor, Mrs. Mullen, and the school’s police liaison, Officer Pasture. A pit drops into my stomach. Whatever I did, it must’ve been bad.
“Damon, please sit,” Dean Goodfellow says. He’s a pudgy man with long blonde hair and a face like a bulldog; if you’re picturing him comically, stop, because everyone in this school is terrified of him, including yours truly. The other two, Dean Haskins and Dean Washington, are serious men, but none attack their jobs with the rage-filled passion of Dean Goodfellow. He runs this school like it’s the streets of Baltimore in The Wire, keeping detailed, ever-growing files on every student with the misfortune to cross his path and trading favors to some of them for information. I’m not gonna lie, I’ve gotten out of more than one detention this way. Wouldn’t you know it, he’s in charge of students with surnames P-Z.
But they’re all three here, which means this is really serious. I pull up the blue plastic seat across from him, willing myself not to break eye contact, and Panzer disappears outside. The secretary isn’t here either. I can feel my heart pounding in my chest. What’s going on?
“Damon,” Goodfellow says, shifting in his seat and locking his fingers together on the table in front of him. Everybody else at the table is staring at their laps; they know the drill. When Goodfellow is working…
interrogating, more like
…you let him be.
AUTHOR BIO & LINKS:
Christian Chiakulas is a writer, musician, political activist, and single father from Chicago. His writing has appeared in the Huffington Post and he writes the “Radical Christian Millennial” blog for Patheos.com.
Website URL: blogspot.com/christianchiakulas
Blog URL: http://www.patheos.com/blogs/radicalchristianmillennial/
Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/christianchiakulasofficial
Twitter handle: @ChrisChiakulas